I. Lovebirds. Poems by Tosin Otitoju (2016) in
three sections. This is a new book, Tosin’s eighth. Format:
II. Questions & Answers. Q = me. A = Tosin.
A: Another example of the hard-edged - calculations and robots - in what should be soft and romantic. I mean, in the realm of love, who thinks of mergers and cost-savings, hedges and insurance? Then again, who doesn't - I mean who doesn't among people who think in these terms about almost everything else?
A TRUE STORY (20 poems)
TWO ANGRY BIRDS (10
poems)
THE LOVE MOVEMENT (25
poems)
From my perspective as a
reader, these are some of the vivid tropes and themes in Lovebirds:
technology; social media; business; mirrors; gods; angels; God; marriage; luck.
Permeating Lovebirds, there is a refined testimony
of ancient, enduring human themes mixed with contemporary technology and ongoing
concerns.
A few poetic samples
from longer poems:
“Wishes and Horses”
Everything points to a
need for a merger
To save on duplicating
auras on twitter . . .
It’s good to be wise,
better to be lucky.
(pages 23-24).
“Feedback”
I see in you a blur
instead of your face a ghost
question-marks, answers,
hypnotizing laughs.
. . . black-magic or test-the-spirits
angels here with us.
(pages 26-27).
“Sometimes You Need”
Misery loves company
And gravity needs
distance.
(page 42).
“When the Boat Hit the Rocks”
There comes a point
when you start to yearn
for the simple
complexity
of city life.
(page 43).
II. Questions & Answers. Q = me. A = Tosin.
Q: What is it about mirrors?
A: Mirrors for
some weird reason. I'd actually meant to do a whole collection of poems either
directly about mirrors or indirectly by writing a poem and an opposite or
something like that. I later decided on Love and a couple of other collections
to come...mirrors are more abstract...you try to hang a commercial project on
mirrors and...I don't know, Nigerians know love and maybe have less time for
you to explain that the topic is mirrors - nobody wants the headache. If you
want more people to love you(r work), try Arithmetic over Differential
Equations. :)
Q: Lovebirds is timeless, but also of
the contemporary tech world. What kind of impact does tech have on love and
social relationships?
A: In this
collection I hoped to do love and romance, but I'm delighted that it also had
an interesting setting, namely, tech. So it's romantic, but it's robotic.
Tech is a
thing masculine and robot-like, which would seem to be the opposite of
romantic. It's physics, chemistry, planets, science, feedback amplification,
bits/bytes/packets/cyber, twitter.
By the way,
Janelle Monáe did androids too in her music, a whole album titled The ArchAndroid, and that's specifically
why I had the guts to choose "Android Love" for the title of the poem
I placed first. I think of this as the "overture" introducing the
opera, the robot opera.
Q: How does business figure into
Lovebirds? And other systems?
A: Another example of the hard-edged - calculations and robots - in what should be soft and romantic. I mean, in the realm of love, who thinks of mergers and cost-savings, hedges and insurance? Then again, who doesn't - I mean who doesn't among people who think in these terms about almost everything else?
And once you
discover that there are planetary systems with multiple suns, won't your love
poetry or even your mythology shift to include this image of a "two-sun
dance"?
And if your
work includes experiencing or understanding positive feedback loops, when you
then consider thoughts feeding on similar thoughts, or an image feeding on its
mirror image, or two people sharing synchronized feelings, won't you deduce or
imagine resonance, system overheating, heightened excitement, or that
screeching noise from the microphone-with-speakers?
In summary,
at the center of this collection is a love, mystical, old-fashioned, yearning,
and poetic. Yet in the poems we find hints of academics, mathematics,
technology, science, business, and so on. For example, there is the
"Definition" which feels quite formal to me, like something I would
do in math and I presume others would do in law for instance - begin a study of
a thing with a precise definition and logically go through a proof, examples,
corollaries and the rest. I adore this definition of love. I tried to get it in
Wikipedia but some gatekeeper kept rejecting it. That was annoying. I'm expert
enough to provide a definition of love! I get annoyed with things like this. It
would take another page to explore and explain the annoyance.
Q: In several of the poems, there is
an interesting interplay between different ways of perceiving reality. For
example, gods and God are mentioned, angels, ghosts. Do they all exist
simultaneously in some kind of dreamscape?
A: There's a bit
I'm not saying about the angels, ghosts, and shall we say more mystical
experiences that inspired this love and parts of this collection.
2015 or so, I
told my good friend (an ex, naturally) that I was in love with someone online
even though it was not an affair and there was no actual talking and how very
psychic everything was from day one. I was amazed that he understood.
In public, I
won't talk like that for fear that they still lock people up in mental
institutions - do they? I also told a very young friend (a veritable cool kid,
some sort of art student, teenager, in university abroad) and he understood
too. He said, oh, you mean subbing. Apparently, young people did that all the
time - relating privately on social media through subliminal but public
messages. Then they collectively dumped twitter and moved on to...what was it
the youngsters moved on to? Instagram? SnapChat?
Let's just
say this: I am very thankful to the muses for this work, and very thankful to
one major muse - wink, and thankful to God, and to ... I usually don't write
acknowledgement pages because it's so impossible to truly pin down all the
major inspirations for a work. I don't feel as psychic today as I did in those
days, and I think it's because this work is done?
Aside,
there's a child that lives in my compound, who's back today from two weeks away
at Grandma's. I wish I had the talent to write about her - the way her voice
makes me feel. It rings like a bell. She talks simply all the time, and I
simply die of happiness at her enthusiasm. Oh I love the other kids as well -
the one that just learned to talk animal talk to invisible friends, startling
her mother, and the littler one whose voice I haven't found yet, although
sometimes she cries, and now she calls my name when she sees me.
We had a lot
of additional kids here for the holidays - some boys for a change hohoho.
Anyhow, I pray one day for the talent to explain the beauty that is her excited
talking. She was just shouting something now, I think they were making
play-food and she was inviting the others to eat.
Note: We did
a Q & A session in 2011 that is available in two parts. One of the topics
was the beauty of Yemen, but this is too painful a topic to revive here, given
the ongoing war and its catastrophic impact. Maybe we can speak of it down the
road, when peace is brokered.
October 10, 2011: Interview with Tosin Otitoju, Part One.
October 11, 2011: Interview with Tosin Otitoju, Part Two.
Today's Rune: Partnership.
October 10, 2011: Interview with Tosin Otitoju, Part One.
October 11, 2011: Interview with Tosin Otitoju, Part Two.
Today's Rune: Partnership.
1 comment:
Seems like modern poetry but with an older sensitivity. Gonna have to check these out
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